Homework Help: English

Posted by JM on Monday, April 7, 2008 at 6:33pm.

Please help. How can I word this better?

Rhea did not even question why they can not just all go together up to his room.

English - Writeacher, Monday, April 7, 2008 at 6:49pm
For one thing, there's a problem with the sequencing of the verb tenses. The main verb is past tense ("did...question") but the subordinate verb is present tense ("can...go"). If you fix that issue, it'll be better.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/verbs.htm#sequence
- English - brianna, Thursday, May 15, 2008 at 6:16pm
  past tensefor am is are

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