Homework Help Forum: english- Ms. sue

Posted by rose on Sunday, April 6, 2008 at 9:44pm.

The economy is influenced by many factors that determine its surplus or deficit. Throughout the last several decades, we have seen the world’s dependency on oil and gas. Also, oil and gas are among two of the most important resources in the globe. As the demand for oil and gas grows, the American family spends an average of $200 to $300 in gasoline every month. Oil and gas continue to be major contributors to the stability or instability, of the larger economies, such as those of the United States, Germany, and Japan, and the third-world nations as well. The high price of crude oil has seriously affected all aspects of the american economy from basic transportation to the high cost of consumer goods; however, finding a solution is no easy task when dealing with such a complex global issues.

• english- Ms. sue - Ms. Sue, Sunday, April 6, 2008 at 9:51pm

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• english- Ms. sue - Ms. Sue, Sunday, April 6, 2008 at 10:11pm

  What is your prompt? What question are you trying to answer? What is your thesis statement? I'm having a hard time trying to figure out why you're writing this paragraph and what you want to prove. Following are my comments upon what you have written. The economy is influenced by many factors that determine its surplus or deficit. << Surplus and deficit of what? As the demand for oil and gas grows, the American family spends an average of $200 to $300 in gasoline every month. << What is your source for this statistic? Are you including heating oil? Please explain. Oil and gas continue to be major contributors to the stability or instability, of the larger economies, such as those of the United States, Germany, and Japan, and the third-world nations as well. << Do you mean oil and gas PRICES? Have Bangladesh, Congo, Nepal, Albania, and other countries' economies been hurt by these high prices? Source? however, finding a solution is no easy task when dealing with such a complex global issues. << Is this one issue or several ISSUES? Please explain what you mean by "complex global issues."

  
  

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