Grammar Correction, Please?

Shakespeare in Love

1) What are the main themes of the film? The filmmaker’s message is not clear until we see what happens to the protagonist.

The Main themes of the film are love, overcoming obstacles and doing what you believe is the right thing to do and fighting for what you want. {There’s a lot}

2) What is the filmmaker revealing about Shakespeare?

The filmmaker is revealing that Shakespeare was a man of love and poetry, that there was something more than just comedy and serving your duty, but that you could truly right the ways of true love and perform them. Not just live them.

3) What did you learn about Shakespeare that you didn’t know before?

I know a lot about Shakespeare already and I didn’t learn anything new really, I don’t think that movie was fact it was more showing what it was like for him but he was actually quite the ladies man he was everywhere with everyone in true life.

4) Choose 1 good actor-What is exceptional about his or her performance?

One great actor was Gwen Paltro, {viola playing Juliet in the his play} she was in love with poetry and found herself falling in love with Shakespeare himself with or without that plays although that was the source of their passion. She was very independent and a strong believer in love and nothing else, the only reason she married another was for her queen who demanded it. Shakespeare would have been killed if she denied so she gave up her life {metaphorically} to save him and knew their love would last forever.

5) Do you recommend this for class? - What grade? - When?

Well there are some nudity and sex scenes so I don’t think you can watch it in class but it is a good movie and you can do a report on it. The Grade you would have to be in is college to watch this because schools are strict about even a glimpse of nudity.

6) What other questions or comments do you have about this film?

This was a great film packed with, good poetry, a love story and easy to comprehend but not something that is based on fact.

7) What do you notice about the filming of the movie? Was the scenery beautiful? Frightening? Effective?

The scenery was nothing really; they show the playhouse and the town and some nice houses but nothing really about beauty shots. The scenery was Effective, but frightening not at all.

Grammar Correction, Please?

Shakespeare in Love

1) What are the main themes of the film? The filmmaker’s message is not clear until we see what happens to the protagonist.

The Main themes of the film are love, overcoming obstacles and doing what you believe is the right thing to do and fighting for what you want. {There’s a lot} Your second and fourth are basically the same; combine them.

2) What is the filmmaker revealing about Shakespeare?

The filmmaker is revealing that Shakespeare was a man of love and poetry, that there was something more than just comedy and serving your duty, but that you could truly right the ways of true love and perform them. Not just live them. "something more" to what? or to whom? this is a vague statement that is hard to fathom. And then you say "your country" and "you could" - what? you mean me?? surely not!! And what are "them"? Finally, that last phrasing is a fragment, not a complete sentence.

3) What did you learn about Shakespeare that you didn’t know before?

I know a lot about Shakespeare already and I didn’t learn anything new really, I don’t think that movie was fact it was more showing what it was like for him but he was actually quite the ladies man he was everywhere with everyone in true life. Correct all the run-ons; clarify "it."

4) Choose 1 good actor-What is exceptional about his or her performance?

One great actor was Gwen Paltro, {viola playing Juliet in the his play} she was in love with poetry and found herself falling in love with Shakespeare himself with or without that plays although that was the source of their passion. She was very independent and a strong believer in love and nothing else, the only reason she married another was for her queen who demanded it. Shakespeare would have been killed if she denied so she gave up her life {metaphorically} to save him and knew their love would last forever. You need to read this section aloud and find all the nonsensical phrasing, extra words, missing words, etc. Then rewrite and repost.

5) Do you recommend this for class? - What grade? - When?

Well there are some nudity and sex scenes so I don’t think you can watch it in class but it is a good movie and you can do a report on it. The Grade you would have to be in is college to watch this because schools are strict about even a glimpse of nudity.

6) What other questions or comments do you have about this film?

This was a great film packed with, good poetry, a love story and easy to comprehend but not something that is based on fact.

7) What do you notice about the filming of the movie? Was the scenery beautiful? Frightening? Effective?

The scenery was nothing really; they show the playhouse and the town and some nice houses but nothing really about beauty shots. The scenery was Effective, but frightening not at all.

Read aloud and make corrections; then repost.

Shakespeare in Love

1) What are the main themes of the film? The filmmaker’s message is not clear until we see what happens to the protagonist.

To determine the main themes of the film, we can analyze the storyline and the messages conveyed throughout. It seems that the main themes in "Shakespeare in Love" are love, overcoming obstacles, and following one's passions and beliefs. These themes are evident as the protagonist navigates the complexities of love, faces various challenges in pursuing his goals, and ultimately takes a stand for what he believes in. This movie encompasses these key themes, among others.

2) What is the filmmaker revealing about Shakespeare?

The filmmaker of "Shakespeare in Love" reveals a different side of Shakespeare than what is commonly portrayed. In this film, Shakespeare is depicted as a man driven by love and poetry rather than solely focusing on comedy and fulfilling his duty. The filmmaker shows that there is more to Shakespeare's work than meets the eye, emphasizing his ability to capture the essence of true love and portray it through his plays. This version of Shakespeare highlights his romantic and emotional side and portrays him as someone who can embody the very ideals he writes about.

3) What did you learn about Shakespeare that you didn’t know before?

Regarding new information about Shakespeare, it seems like this movie doesn't provide much historically accurate knowledge about him. "Shakespeare in Love" is more of a fictionalized portrayal of what it might have been like for him. While it offers insight into his romantic side and explores his relationships, it may not provide significant factual information about his life or character. Therefore, if you are already familiar with Shakespeare's biography, this film may not reveal much new information.

4) Choose 1 good actor-What is exceptional about his or her performance?

One remarkable performance in "Shakespeare in Love" is by Gwyneth Paltrow, who plays Viola and also Juliet in Shakespeare's play. The exceptional aspect of her performance lies in her ability to convey both the love for poetry and her growing affection for Shakespeare himself. Paltrow portrays Viola as an independent and strong-willed character who believes fiercely in love. Despite societal expectations and personal sacrifices, she remains true to her convictions. Paltrow's portrayal effectively captures the complexity and depth of Viola's character, making her performance stand out.

5) Do you recommend this for class? - What grade? - When?

While "Shakespeare in Love" is a good movie, it's important to consider the appropriateness for a classroom setting. Due to the nudity and sex scenes present in the film, it may not be suitable for younger audiences or certain educational settings. However, if you are in college or discussing Shakespeare's works in a mature context, this film could be recommended for further exploration or as a subject for a report.

6) What other questions or comments do you have about this film?

If you have any additional questions or comments about "Shakespeare in Love," feel free to ask. I'm here to help!

7) What do you notice about the filming of the movie? Was the scenery beautiful? Frightening? Effective?

From your description, it appears that the scenery in the movie is not showcased in a visually stunning way. The focus of the film seems to be more on the playhouse, the town, and some houses, rather than emphasizing beauty shots. While the scenery may not necessarily be breath-taking or awe-inspiring, it is described as effective in conveying the story and setting the tone. It doesn't seem to have a frightening aspect to it based on your comments.