Please help I am having a bit of trouble I need to write two separate paragrapghs of eight to twelve sentences each based on the following scenarios. (I can make up details if I need to to make my paragraphs more realistic....

Paragraph 1..
I have applied for a job as a Medical Office Assistant. As a evaluation ,the Human Resoures Department asks me to write a paragraph describing an experience that I have had that inspired me or guided me to become a Medical office assistant.

(I know that my audience is my potenial employer and I need to show my enthusiam for my work and I have to clearly express my interest. I also know I need to show the employer why I am the best candidate for the job)

In Paragraph 2 I need to write about my favorite cousin who as moved to my area and is looking for a job. All of her other previous jobs have been working in a deptment store as a cashier and she plans to apply at similar stores. But I know that she has many other talents. In fact she would be a perfect canidate for a job opening where I work. My boss in looking for a reliable assistat.I know that she would get along with the boss and she would be good at the job. (I know that my goal is to persuade my cousin to apply for the job. I need to e-mail her a paragraph with the specifics of the job and the reasons that she should apply. I need to use an informal tone but use correct business writing to show I take my recommendation seriously.

I just seem to get started there is so much information that need to be covered. I have a few ideas but I am not sure what the best ways is to write these paragraphs any help you can give me would be great. (I am having a bit of trouble also because I was in a car accident and I am recovering from a head injry and it is hard for me to put what I want to say together thanks again for the help

I need help with the my English that I posted on March 17,2008 If anybody could please help that would be great thanks you very much

I'm sorry to hear about your car accident and head injury. I'll do my best to assist you in writing these paragraphs.

For Paragraph 1, you can start by introducing yourself and your interest in the field of Medical Office Assisting. Then, you can proceed to describe an experience that inspired or guided you towards this career path. It could be a personal experience, interaction with a medical professional, or even a story about someone you know who had positive interactions with medical office assistants. Remember to convey your enthusiasm and passion for the job in your writing. Here's an example paragraph:

"Dear Hiring Manager, my name is [Your Name], and I am extremely excited about the opportunity to become a Medical Office Assistant at [Company Name]. The journey that led me to pursue this career has been both enlightening and inspiring. I vividly remember an incident from my childhood when my grandmother fell ill and required frequent visits to the doctor's office. During those visits, I observed how the Medical Office Assistants played a pivotal role in providing comfort, organization, and support to patients and healthcare professionals alike. Witnessing their dedication, compassion, and efficiency left a lasting impression on me. It fueled my determination to become a part of this essential healthcare team, and I am confident that my attention to detail, excellent organizational skills, and genuine passion for helping others make me the ideal candidate for this position."

Moving on to Paragraph 2, the goal is to persuade your cousin to apply for a job opening at your workplace. Begin by addressing your cousin in a friendly, yet professional tone, and briefly mention her previous experience as a cashier. Then, emphasize the other talents and skills she possesses which make her a great fit for the job at your company. Be specific about the job opening, its requirements, and why you believe your cousin is the right person for the role. Here's an example paragraph:

"Hey [Cousin's Name], I hope this email finds you well. I recently heard that you're on the lookout for a new job, and I couldn't help but think of a perfect opportunity that awaits you. At [Your Company Name], where I currently work, we have an opening for a reliable assistant. Given your background as a cashier in department stores, I know you are accustomed to handling various responsibilities efficiently and providing excellent customer service. However, I believe you have so much more to offer. The role we have available requires exceptional organizational skills, great attention to detail, and the ability to work closely with our boss. I know you possess these qualities and more. Your exceptional work ethic, adaptability, and natural people skills would fit seamlessly into our team. I strongly encourage you to apply for this position, as I genuinely believe it's an opportunity for you to showcase your talents and make a positive impact."

Remember to personalize and adjust the paragraphs according to your specific situation and the job requirements. I hope this guidance helps you craft successful paragraphs. If you need any further assistance, feel free to ask.