posted by Christi on .
Does the following make sense?
In this study I will argue that prolonged exposure of social oppression and subjugation is the basis for Black women’s limited participation in society’s political structure. I will support my argument by providing a more detailed analysis of the relationship between social powerlessness and racism, sexism and economic oppression that impact Black women simultaneously.
How can you rephrase this and leave out all the "I will" phrasing?