Does the following make sense?
In this study I will argue that prolonged exposure of social oppression and subjugation is the basis for Black women’s limited participation in society’s political structure. I will support my argument by providing a more detailed analysis of the relationship between social powerlessness and racism, sexism and economic oppression that impact Black women simultaneously.
english - Writeacher, Wednesday, March 12, 2008 at 12:09pm
How can you rephrase this and leave out all the "I will" phrasing?