February 24, 2017

Homework Help: Editing

Posted by Student on Sunday, February 3, 2008 at 8:10pm.

Gordimer chooses to emphasise more so the physical, as opposed to emotional, invasion of the Immortality Act.

Could someone please edit that sentence? It bothers me because it sounds awkward, especially the "physical, as opposed to emotional, invasion" part. Is there another way to reword it but include everything that I already said?

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