Homework Help: short story

Posted by Kim on Monday, January 28, 2008 at 1:16pm.

I apologize I meant to say short story not essay! Its suppose to be a short story that is descriptive, it has subtext, twist, and dialogue

short story - drwls, Monday, January 28, 2008 at 1:19pm
I thought that is what you meant! I think you have a knack for it; just work on the grammar etc. issues mentioned by Writeacher and BobPursley
short story - Writeacher, Monday, January 28, 2008 at 1:32pm
Yes, it is a very good beginning for a short story. With a twist is right! Nice one.

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