Posted by Emily on Thursday, January 24, 2008 at 7:27pm.
It's better than 95% of the poems I read in The New Yorker. I am not sure of the answer to your "Who Am I" question, but have some ideas. I am a bit troubled by the idea of a poem as a riddle, however. On the other hand, most modern poems are riddles, since it is fashionable to make them almost undecipherable.
I think you can be proud of what you have written.
Thanks!! Yeah, we had to write it in some sort of riddle.
We had to use this poem (below) as sort of an example; maybe I should reword the ending to make it sound like less of a riddle. Does anybody have anybody ideas?
I personally think it would be a better poem without the "What am I?" line at the end.
I'm not a good critique of poetry. Perhaps another teacher will respond.
However, I think you're talking about dreaming.
Yep, you're right.
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