okay this is my intro

Egar Allen Poe is well known for his Gothic Novels.There are many different enterpretations of "the Raven" that have been presented over the years.Edgar Allen Poe and The simpsons rendition of "the raven" are similar in some ways and different in others..

Now i have to write a conluson with a thesis Re-stated and Original closing idead/statement

but what do i write..
and is my intro good?

You might include the purpose of Poe's original poem and the purpose of the Simpson's version in your introduction. Then, you need to write the body of your essay before you write the conclusion, which should sum up the points you made in the body.

My suggestions for your intro:

Edgar Allen Poe is well known for his Gothic fiction. There are many different interpretations of "The Raven" that have been presented over the years, including one ___________. Edgar Allen Poe and The Simpsons' rendition of "the raven"<~~capitals where needed in a title are similar in some ways and different in others.. <~~get rid of extra period

Your intro is basic. If I were to grade it, I suppose I'd give it a C- since it's basically there. But where's a "hook" or "gimmick" or something truly interesting that makes people WANT to keep reading?

Did you read that link I sent you on conclusions? If not, do so. It tells you what to include and what NOT to include. Here are a couple of other webpages about conclusions:

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/conclude.html

http://nutsandbolts.washcoll.edu/ending.html
Read the section called The point of an ending.

http://esl.about.com/cs/writing/ht/ht_essay.htm
See #s 11, 12, 13, and 14.

Which sentence in your intro is your thesis statement? It needs to be rephrased and included in your conclusion, according to your instructions. You also need a closing statement so the reader isn't left hanging, expected to draw his/her own conclusions!

Read all the links I've sent you on conclusions. Then draft one and repost.

Your introduction provides a brief overview of Edgar Allen Poe and mentions the different interpretations of "The Raven" over the years, as well as the similarities and differences between Edgar Allen Poe and The Simpsons' rendition of the poem. It can be improved by adding a clear thesis statement, which will guide your conclusion.

To write a conclusion with a restated thesis and an original closing idea/statement, you can follow these steps:

1. Restate your thesis: Begin by summarizing your main argument or point from the body of your writing. Make sure to rephrase it using different words but still convey the same idea.
For example, "In conclusion, both Edgar Allen Poe's 'The Raven' and The Simpsons' rendition share certain resemblances, yet their differences are equally apparent."

2. Review key points: Remind your reader of the main points you discussed in your essay. Briefly summarize the similarities and differences you mentioned between Poe and The Simpsons.

3. Offer a final thought: Synthesize your analysis and provide a final insight or thought related to your topic. This should be an original statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.
For example, "Despite the variations in tone, style, and interpretation, 'The Raven' and The Simpsons' adaptation remind us of the everlasting influence of Poe's work on popular culture, highlighting his lasting legacy as a master of the macabre."

Remember to keep your conclusion concise and avoid introducing new arguments or evidence. Your conclusion should effectively summarize your main points and leave a lasting impression on the reader.

I hope this helps you write a strong conclusion!