February 27, 2017

Homework Help: English composition

Posted by John on Monday, January 7, 2008 at 10:40pm.

We do not allow capital punishment in this ideal land, for criminals should have time to repent in jail. In the long run, there would be many people who changed and become good people in the prison. Opponents of the capital punishment argue that capital punish can not diminish murders and in some cases people who didn't commit can be involved in the capital punishment and experience death. Most European countries do not have capital punishment. Canada, Australia, and New Zealand do not have capital punishment. However many asian countries and The USA has capital punishment. In this ideal land, we want to lee peacefully. So to make a community free from criminal, the government will do its best. No capital punishment will be enacted in the community.
We need censorship in the international community to protect the family and the society. Books, plays, films, radio and television programs, and some other forms of media influence people in the community. After censorship the government will let inhabitants watch or listen to them. Then this community will be an ideal land.
I made a composition. Would you check it, please? Do I use correct articles?

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