I have to write a paragraph about a vacation spot using order of importance and I have no idea where to begin. Can someone help me start?
english - Ms. Sue, Thursday, December 13, 2007 at 11:35am
First choose a vacation spot, preferably a place that you've visited.
Order of importance means that you start with the most notable or impressive fact. For instance, people flock to the Grand Canyon to see the huge chasm carved by nature over millions of years. Another example: The Wisconsin Dells is noted as being the "water park capital of the world."
english - Tabby, Thursday, December 13, 2007 at 11:37am
I want to do Daytona Beach, Florida. Would the most important thing be the beach?
english - Anonymous, Thursday, December 13, 2007 at 6:33pm
no not really because there are a lot of things to do in daytona beach like taking a walk or riding bikes or just simply like you said sitting at the beach soaking up the sun.
english - Ms. Sue, Thursday, December 13, 2007 at 11:39am
I haven't been to Daytona, but I believe you're right. Of course, it's a matter of opinion.
english - GuruBlue, Thursday, December 13, 2007 at 12:22pm
Others would say that car racing is the most important aspect of that place.