Posted by John on Monday, December 10, 2007 at 8:15am.
Everything looks good, with a few exceptions:
1. Remove the word "As" at the beginning of the second sentence after your example sentence.
2. Put a space after the comma between "plural" and "we" in the third sentence after the example sentence.
3. Consider removing the last sentence since it's repetitive.
You don't need "the" in front of "place" in the very first sentence.
Nice writing.
=)
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