Posted by Rachael on Friday, November 30, 2007 at 10:35pm.
If you've tried to copy and paste, it didn't work. You may need to type these sentences here.
We'll be glad to help you if we see your sentences.
The goose bit the mailman on the leg.
Ans:The goose bit the mailman on the leg, and ran away.
With five gallons of gas.
Ans:The arsonist set the field ablaze with five gallons of gas.
Because the store was closed
Ans:I was unable to buy my medicine, because the store was closed.
#1 is correct as it's originally written; you don't need to do anything. If you plan to keep your revision, though, be sure to delete that comma.
#2 looks fine.
#3 looks fine except you should delete the comma before "because."
Thanks, so much
For the seventh time.
Ans:No, you may not play ball in the house for the seventh time.
The rainbow stretched across the sky from the ice cream truck to the house down the lane.
Ans: No change.
Between the sixth and seventh floors of the building in the stairwell over in the corner.
Ans: There was a snake over in the corner of the stairwell between the sixth and seventh floors of the building.
Since I started taking college classes.
Ans:My life has changed since I started to take college classes.
OR Since I have started taking college classes, my days are hectic.
When the garage door was closed.
Ans:Paulís car was damaged when the garage door closed.
Friday nights at the diner were always busy, I prefer the activity.
Ans:I prefer to work when itís busy at the diner on Friday nights. OR
Since itís always busy at the diner on Friday nights, I prefer to work
All your corrections and instances of "no change" are correct.
Thank You for your time and patience.
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