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Being the first in my family to attend college is not so easy. There has never been anyone at home to help or to guide me. I did not always receive the support I needed since there have been family members who have doubted me. My mother places a tremendous amount of pressure to go to college<~~add comma while my father doubts I can successfully do so. Yet,<~~delete comma both of them have inspired my dreams and goals and have shaped the person I am.
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My family and community have shaped what I want to be and the person I am today. I realized I wanted to be a psychologist after taking child development and psychology. I took those classes to understand my father better and not judge him. Because of the difficulties I went through<~~add comma I am now a stronger person, a person that does not give up. I stopped doubting myself,<~~delete comma and started working hard because I have dreams and goals for the future that I am determined to make them<~~delete "them" happen.
Is public civility gone?
I agree with the claim that there has been a loss of public civility in today's society. This is due to the fact that many people cannot control their own emotional behavior, People are trying to be different and break with the past, and one way in which they do that is by no longer conforming to what is considered "acceptable" behavior and many people now seem to be ignorant to the fact that they are rude and what constitutes polite behavior.
Most people cannot control their own emotional behaviors. In the cases from the video, the people who were being rude were also very emotional. In general, the angrier or more upset people get, the more likely they are to act without thinking. The specific actions that are considered polite or rude vary dramatically by place, time and context. Differences in social role, gender, social class, religion and cultural identity all affect the appropriateness of a given behavior. Consequently, a behavior that is considered perfectly acceptable by one group of people may be considered clearly rude by another.
People are trying to be different and break with the past, and one way in which they do that is by no longer conforming to what is considered "acceptable" behavior. Being rude grabs the viewer’s attention, as we saw in the cases of Serena Williams, Kanye West, and Joe Wilson. They all demonstrated a lack of manners which seemed to be more prevalent in the past. There were basic guidelines that you were taught from a very early age about how to be polite. You simply did not disrespect your elders or anybody else. Yes, you have to release anger, but there are appropriate ways and times to do it.
In some cases, it is mere ignorance and people genuinely do not know how to behave in a polite manner or are unaware of how their actions are seen by others. And, of course, rudeness can be a rather relative thing. For example, phone related behavior that strikes many adults as rude is actually perfectly acceptable to most of the younger people. Many teenagers regard their phone as having top priority and see this as perfectly fine. So, when a student whips out her cell phone to answer a text while the teacher is explaining her paper grade to the student, she probably sees it as socially acceptable behavior. It also helps explain the student’s low paper grade, as spending the class time texting tends to have that result.
There is considerable evidence that public discourse is becoming less civil in public. This is due to the facts that people jump to anger very quickly and do not think about what they are doing. By acting politely we are acknowledging that worth in ourselves and others and thus doing the right thing. By being rude, we lower our own worth by trying to lower that of others. As Americans we should all get together and bring back the public civility.
Before you receive your favorite pizza you start thinking what kind of toppings do you want on it.