Posted by Roseliandystarajestarahjaesracritreah on Tuesday, November 27, 2007 at 5:38pm.
I has to revise the following sentence
naomi winned, why d you leave me like this! naomi soon began to cry.naomi lucas yelled Its okay youwill be just fine

Grammar  Ms. Sue, Tuesday, November 27, 2007 at 5:40pm
Naomi whined, "Why did you leave me like this?"
Naomi soon began to cry.
"Naomi," Lucas yelled, "it's okay. You will be just fine."
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