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Posted by Student - HELP! on Monday, November 26, 2007 at 4:14pm.
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Each person in the choir came from a different background and social class, but were all bound together by the music we practiced.
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- This just sounds wrong,.english sentence. - Student - HELP!, Monday, November 26, 2007 at 4:14pm
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the we sounds like its in the wrong tense or something.
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- English - Writeacher, Monday, November 26, 2007 at 4:17pm
The "we" sounds wrong because there's a shift in the sentence from 3rd person to 1st. How can you rephrase it and get rid of "we"? What would you substitute?
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- This just sounds wrong,.english sentence. - Student - HELP!, Monday, November 26, 2007 at 4:20pm
- This just sounds wrong,.english sentence. - Student - HELP!, Monday, November 26, 2007 at 4:20pm
- This just sounds wrong,.english sentence. - Student - HELP!, Monday, November 26, 2007 at 4:22pm
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We all came from different backgrounds and social classes, but were all bound together by the music we practiced. Thanks@
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- This just sounds wrong,.english sentence. - Student - HELP!, Monday, November 26, 2007 at 4:23pm
We all came from different backgrounds and social classes, but related to each other through the music we practiced.
something seems wrong
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- This just sounds wrong,.english sentence. - Writeacher, Monday, November 26, 2007 at 4:25pm
I think it's fine. The only other way would be to turn it all into 3rd person, but it's not as smooth as what you've written.
Each person in the choir came from a different background and social class, but all were bound together by the music they practiced.
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- This just sounds wrong,.english sentence. - Writeacher, Monday, November 26, 2007 at 4:23pm
- This just sounds wrong,.english sentence. - Student - HELP!, Monday, November 26, 2007 at 4:24pm
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nm thanks. sorry for spamming
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