Posted by Robert on Saturday, November 24, 2007 at 4:32pm.
This would be better:
Seventeen years later, 150 pounds heavier and 5 ½ feet taller, I have become used to the American way of doing things, having lived the majority of my life in California and Washington.
Word may still tell you it's a fragment. Who knows why Word's grammar checker does what it does?! It's not a fragment.
If you have question about the changes I made, let me know.
=)
I like your way of phrasing things better. It flows a lot better.
Thank you.
You're very welcome.
=)
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