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July 29, 2014

Homework Help: English

Posted by Danny on Thursday, November 22, 2007 at 10:45pm.

Can someone help me with the intro of my essay. my teacher says I have to get rid of the YOUs in my essay but what can I replace it with.thanks

Being the first in the family to attend college is not so easy. There is no one at home to help you and to guide you .You do not always get the support you need there are always people, that doubt you. The people that do believe in you put a tremendous amount of pressure on you because you are the first one to graduate. That is my case. My mother pressures me to go to college while my father doubts I can go to college.

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