Posted by John on Wednesday, November 14, 2007 at 2:41pm.
The only thing I'd change is to delete the word "a" before "good" in the second sentence. You might also think about spelling out the number (four) instead of using the numeral (4).
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/numbers.htm
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