Homework Help: Language

Posted by Samantha on Thursday, September 13, 2007 at 8:03pm.

I wnat to see if I got this right, the first one is what it looked like before I made changes. There should be 5 changes.

What fun the zoo is. we love it. I feed the elephants but their trunks tickle me. I buy zoo food other food may make them sick.

What fun the zoo is! We love it. I feed the elephants, but their trunks tickle me. I buy zoo food. Other food may make them sick.

Language - Ms. Sue, Thursday, September 13, 2007 at 8:08pm
Samantha, your sentences are perfect. You've made the right corrections. Good job! :-)

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