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July 23, 2014

Homework Help: English

Posted by ds on Monday, August 6, 2007 at 9:39pm.

What, if anything, is wrong with with the following sentence?

Do you advise me to go to college or that I should get a job after high school.

a. Run-on
b.Misplaced part
c. Lacks parallel parts
d. Properly constructed sentence.

I believe the answer is c.
I think it should read; Do you advise me to go to college or to get a job after high school.

I believe that would make the sentence parallel.



Yes, you're right ... on both the answer and the rewritten sentence.

=)

Yes! :-) You're right. You've corrected the problem of the parallel parts very well.

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