Homework Help: English

Posted by AA on Monday, August 6, 2007 at 9:22pm.

The following sentence is in a business letter.

To be fit, you should get enough sleep, exercise regularly, and eat a healthy diet.

Since it is a business letter, would "you" be an unclear pronoun?

Yes. How would you make it more formal?

I would replace you with one.
Would that be correct?

Yes. You should say, ". . . one would be fit. . . ."

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