posted by AA on .
What, if anything, is wrong with the following sentence.
To be fit, you should get enough sleep, exercise regularly, and eat a healthy diet.
a. Properly constructed sentence
b. Comma splice
c. Lacks parallel parts
d. Unclear pronoun
This is a properly constructed sentence. It has parallel parts, and there is no comma splice. The pronoun reference is clear.
However, in formal writing, we don't use the word "you." I assume this is not to be used in a formal paper.