Posted by lorie anderson on .
could some one critique my english narrative for me please.
If that's your narrative, sure.
"C" in "could" needs to be capitalized. "Someone" is one word. "English" is capitalized. The period at the end should be a question mark.
If there's more to the essay, it did not copy/paste well. Please repost.
Matt is right. If copying and pasting didn't work, please type it in.