please review my tow scenario to mak sure they are correct with what is being asked.
Scenario 3 - write a negative message to the phone company about charges that should not been on your last months bill.
July 6, 2007
Bellsouth Telephone Company
P. O. Box 001000
Tampa, Florida 33010
Dear Account Representative:
I have been, to date, very satisfied with Bellsouth and the services provided by your company. Your rates are reasonable and I am able to call in and outside of the country without additional charges being billed or without having my calls dropped.
I received the bill for the month of April, was surprised, and concerned about several long distance charges that was charged to my account. I asked family members if they had made these calls and no one in my home made said calls.
I am requesting that your company review the calls made to Canada which are items #20, #23 and #26 and delete all of these calls and make the appropriate adjustments to my May bill.
As stated above, I am pleased with the service provided and look forward to an amicable resolution to these charges. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Mary Carabeo
7325 S.W. 102 Ave
Miami, Florida 33013
Scenario 4 - write a persuasive message to your boss explaining why you should get a rise.
July 6, 2007
To:
It seems like your scenarios are correct based on the given descriptions. Scenario 3 involves writing a negative message to the phone company about unauthorized charges, while Scenario 4 involves writing a persuasive message to your boss requesting a raise.
In Scenario 3, you have effectively addressed the issue by clearly stating your concern about the unauthorized charges on your bill. You have provided specific details about the calls in question and requested the company to review and remove those charges. You have also expressed your overall satisfaction with their services. It is a well-written negative message that is polite and to the point.
In Scenario 4, you have started the message by addressing your boss and expressing the purpose of the message - to explain why you deserve a raise. To make the scenario more accurate, you should expand on your reasons for deserving a raise, such as your accomplishments, contributions to the company, or increased responsibilities. The message should be persuasive, highlighting your value and justifying the request for a raise.
Overall, both scenarios are on the right track, although Scenario 4 could benefit from further elaboration on why you deserve a raise.