A book that has an exciting introduction and a surprising ending would be the best story for me to read.

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Be sure to read the first sentence very carefully -- then read the rest. I think the problem in this sentence is with the linking verb (would be).

How can you fix it?

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I would re-write the sentence this way.

I would enjoy most a book with an exciting introduction and a surprising ending .

That way there is no repetition of "book/story" and everything modifies what it is nearest.

To fix the sentence, you can rephrase it as follows:

"I would enjoy reading a book that has an exciting introduction and a surprising ending the most."

This revision clarifies the intended meaning by specifying that the reader is looking for a book with both an exciting introduction and a surprising ending. Additionally, by including "the most" at the end, it emphasizes the reader's preference for this type of story.