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October 1, 2014

Homework Help: grammer

Posted by Anonymous on Saturday, March 31, 2007 at 2:59am.

Her mind flew so quickly,she had so much to remember, that she forgot to stop at the light.

Easy, it is spelt "grammar"

Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. When you post please clarify as best you can what you want us to do! In addition to the spelling, perhaps you want the example of "personification" in "her mind FLEW."

This reminds me of a physics student once telling me that if he learned any more before the test his brain was going to explode.

... or ...

You may need to fix the punctuation?

It is very hard to tell what is needed here.

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I need to know what people think of this sentence

I'm not a grammer expert, but it almost sounds like a run on. Isn't it?

Her mind flew so quickly. She had so much to remember that she forgot to stop at the red light.

That sounds a lot clearer to me. Fellow teachers, correct me if I'm wrong.

Matt

Matts... that sounds much better. The sentence can also be straightened out with a semicolon after quickly.

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