Her mind flew so quickly,she had so much to remember, that she forgot to stop at the light.

Easy, it is spelt "grammar"

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This reminds me of a physics student once telling me that if he learned any more before the test his brain was going to explode.

... or ...

You may need to fix the punctuation?

It is very hard to tell what is needed here.

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I need to know what people think of this sentence

I'm not a grammar expert, but it almost sounds like a run on. Isn't it?

Her mind flew so quickly. She had so much to remember that she forgot to stop at the red light.

That sounds a lot clearer to me. Fellow teachers, correct me if I'm wrong.

Matt

Matts... that sounds much better. The sentence can also be straightened out with a semicolon after quickly.

To determine what people think of the sentence, it would be helpful to get feedback from others. You can ask for opinions from friends, colleagues, or even post the sentence on a writing or language forum for feedback. Remember to clarify that you are looking for feedback on the clarity and structure of the sentence.

In this case, based on the discussion between Matt and others, it seems that the original sentence could be improved for better clarity. Matt suggests breaking it into two sentences or using a semicolon after "quickly" to separate the two thoughts. Both suggestions aim to improve the sentence structure and make it easier to understand.

Here's an example of the revised sentence suggested by Matt:
"Her mind flew so quickly; she had so much to remember. That she forgot to stop at the red light."

Remember, language and grammar can vary based on the context and personal preferences, so it's essential to consider multiple opinions and choose the option that best fits your intended meaning.