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The prompt is to explain how the author uses narrative voice and characterization to provide social commentary in "The Other Paris"
To find story search 2003 AP English Literature and composition free-response questions #2

Mavis Gallant used both narrative voice and characterization brilliantly in this excerpt of her story “The Other Paris”. She makes great use of the role of the omniscient narrator. She provides insight into the characters by revealing the characters’ private thoughts and feelings. The personalities of the characters gives perspective into what the social norm was in the 1950’s.

To begin analyzing how the author uses narrative voice and characterization to provide social commentary in "The Other Paris," you will first need to locate and read the story. To find it, you can search for the 2003 AP English Literature and Composition free-response questions #2, as indicated in the prompt.

Once you have found the story, read it carefully, paying close attention to how Mavis Gallant employs narrative voice and characterization. Take note of how the omniscient narrator is used and how it provides insight into the characters' private thoughts and feelings. Look for specific examples where the narrative voice allows the reader to gain a deeper understanding of the characters.

As you read, also focus on the characterization. Observe the personalities of the characters and how they contribute to the overall social commentary. Consider the social norms of the 1950s that the characters' personalities and actions reflect, and think about how the author uses these characters to comment on society during that time period.

By thoroughly analyzing the narrative voice and characterization in "The Other Paris," you will be able to identify the ways in which Mavis Gallant provides social commentary. Look for instances where the author's use of narrative voice and characterization challenge or critique societal norms, values, or behaviors, offering a deeper understanding of the underlying issues or themes in the story.

Once you have a comprehensive understanding of the text, you can then provide a thoughtful and detailed analysis in response to the prompt, discussing how the author effectively utilizes narrative voice and characterization to convey social commentary in "The Other Paris".