ROSES ARE RED by JAMES PATTERSON can someone give mi an opinion about this plot summery?do i have to change somethin?
From the author James Patterson comes thriller: Roses are red. In this horrific but also romantic story Detective Alex Cross, who works with FBI, tries to find and capture mysterious criminal who calls himself Mastermind. He robbed banks and killed many innocent people. Many times we get the feeling that he is always somewhere around Cross and other policemen because he knows every detail about everyone and everything. Meanwhile, Alex has troubles of his own back home. His daughter is seriously ill, so Alex must jump between finding The Mastermind and being with his family. Christine, ,who is at first his lover and mother of his son Alex Jr., is reliving her traumatic past when she was kidnapped and almoust killed. Alex works together with Senior Agent Betsey Cavaillere who offers him friendship but with time they get intimate. The Mastermind, meanwhile, continues to strike. Just when they think they have the caught The Mastermind , they are proven wrong again and again. At the end, after Betsy is and murdered, the true identitiy of The Mastermind is revealed but only to to readers- it is Kyle Craig, a good friend of Alex and a good cop.
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The plot summary of "Roses are Red" by James Patterson is a thrilling story about Detective Alex Cross trying to capture a dangerous criminal known as the Mastermind, who has been robbing banks and killing innocent people. Alongside the intense pursuit, Alex faces personal challenges with his seriously ill daughter and the re-emergence of trauma in his lover Christine's past. Throughout the story, Alex works closely with Senior Agent Betsey Cavaillere, and they develop an intimate relationship. However, the Mastermind proves to be elusive, constantly evading capture. Tragically, Betsy is and murdered, and eventually, the true identity of the Mastermind is revealed only to the readers as Alex's friend and fellow cop, Kyle Craig.
In terms of changing something, the main suggestion would be to pay attention to punctuation and grammar. This includes adding commas in appropriate places, starting new paragraphs when changing ideas, places, times, or persons, and maintaining consistency in capitalization and naming conventions. It is also important to clarify certain points, such as the Mastermind's knowledge being limited to their attempts to catch him rather than knowing "everyone and everything." Additionally, the ending regarding Kyle Craig's actions and the resolution between him and Alex Cross is unclear.
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