Homework Help: English- Peer Edit

Posted by Reuben on Thursday, December 21, 2006 at 7:53pm.

Can someone look over this essay and peer edit it for me? Just the basic grammer/spelling/structure of the essay would be great. It's on why I believe the the civil war broke out for history. Pay no attention to the formatting. Thank you. :-)

The Civil War was inevitable from the moment the United States was formed. With two group of people with completely different views and opinions on subjects that define a nation living in the same country, the war was bound to happen. But what events directly lead to a full out war between the north and south? The Dred Scott Decision, Lincoln being elected president, Uncle Tom’s Cabin being published, John Brown, South exporting more than the North, and the geographical differences between the North and the South directly contributed in starting this war. These political, social, and economical events led to the full out war to shape the county that we live in today.

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