Here goes my essay on interpersonal communication:
being aware of of this fact, I proceed to find out what are my nonverbal listening pattern. To do so, I prepared a 500 word speech to be presened in less than half an hour to a small group of my church. In order to obtain the feedback, i previously asked them to gauge my actuation. finnally, I discovered and confiremed by my attendance that i was nervous, my face perspired, my hands quivered, and i was about to llose my conceentration. In addition, i repeated some words like a leitmotiv: " Eh, Well, and I know". The prople tod me that i repeated some of them more than ten times. Moreover, I realized also that i skipped an important paragraph, so that my whole message did not reach my audience, even thoug they let my know that they understand pretty well what i was saying.
Once arrived at home, i made introspection and analyzed my speech performance. i concluded tha i had a lot to improve if i wandt to be a good speaker.]so, i decided to undertake the following steps to overcome the bad habits due to my nervousness and to improve them. I have to prepare myself not only before, but also during and even after my presentation( if theres is time for questions).
First of alll, i decided to take my time to prepare well my presentation. I belive in the fact that, according to Boileau, the French writer, what we conceive will will be enunciated clearly and the sprit to tell it will arrive easily. by the same token, we cannotgive what we do not have, we cannot say well what we do no know will. So, I have to master first my subject before the presentation to my public. After preparing the material, i need to try to understand it and read it aloud alone several times. i can record my while simulating the presentation and listen to my own presentation after. Also, i can simulate a presentation inn front of my friends or my parents or look at me showing off in front of a moirror, all of this with the purpose of improving my expression, my voice, my pitch, among oters.Second,
before the presentation, i have to sleep well. also, i do not have to let me break down by the fear.
Third, I have to conceive and practicefaithfully the following aspects;
-a good technique to overcome the fear to talk in public in to concentration oneself and breathe deeply several times for a while. This type of execise facilitates a better blood circulation.
-Another great and proven technique that can help a lot is the eye contact. When you will first address yourself to the public, spend some few seconds to see your public, to break the ice by inviting everysbody to not stay far behind, to come to nearer you. By doing so, not only you establish more confidence, but also you gain self-confidence. the idea is; i am in control of everything. But to in real control of the situation, the speaker should delve about the theme. He or she must master it very well in order to be able to deliver it normally.
-to master the subject requires time, sacrifice, rehearsal, and practice. Also, simulation, prior role-playing can be necessary.
-The speaker can use the technological techniques such as audiotape, videotape, computer or perhaps a simpler method: mirror observation, to beat the fear.
-Finally, but not the least, the person has to sleep well prior to the meeting. It is not advisable to loose the whole night preparing the speech, there is a risk to not be able to deliver it as planned.
By doing all of the above, the speaker can avoid the bad body lingual signals such as: body an voice tempering, repeating words or sentences, wandering away from the subject, sweating, or even clasping hands in from of the body.
Thank you.
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