Homework Help: Essay Revisions

Posted by Soly on Monday, October 30, 2006 at 10:23pm.

I've made the suggest revisions, as well as change and added somethings. Could you please check if I have fragments, pronoun agreements, run ons, and if I restated my thesis in my conclusion. Thanks!

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