Posted by Mary on .
I need to describe my product. I have a pretend shoe business that I to do for my business class. What exactly I need to do is to describe my product which is shoes. I sell for all seasons, all styles, all prices and everyone. I need it by tonight because it's due tomorrow.
"I sell for all seasons, all styles, all prices and everyone"
^ Isn't that a pretty good description?
I have to write a paragraph on it so that sentence isn't very good. I need help going into more description.
You should write about your products in more detail. I can help you fix up the sentence structure and grammar. :)
Well something that I have is...
Guru shoes sells fasion-forward footwear that just so happens also provides tons of comfort. Guru offers shoes for all seasons wet and dry. We have affordable prices. Our shoes are to fit everyone, so we sell to everyone from babies to adults.
Alright. How about something like this?
"Trendy shoes often sacrifice comfort for fashion, but the only thing Guru Shoes sacrifices is its costs! Affordable, comfortable, and seasonably stylish, Guru Shoes products are unmatched in quality. Not only are they made to withstand all seasons from rainy to dry, but they are made to match people of all tastes, ages, and sizes."
It's not perfect, but you should be able to clean up the little oddities.
*and foot sizes