Posted by Jasmine on Friday, October 6, 2006 at 12:02am.
I'm not sure about my answers . The directions state rewrite the following sentece, focusing on the grammar and rule are . If the sentence is already correct write no change. Can you help me correct them please.
The grammar rule is for sentences 1 & 2:
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(1)The sentence is:
The law form the 1800's mandated that men could buy alcohol and cigarettes only from a state store.
My answer:
No change
(2)The sentence is:
The employee guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.
My answer:
The men's guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.
Inclusive Language-Quoting from Biased Sources.
(1)The sentence is:
The law
from the 1800's mandated that men could buy alcohol and cigarettes only from a state store.
My answer:
No change
Since the sentence is about the 1800's, you are correct. Men's and women's equality did not exist then.
(2)The sentence is:
The employee guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.
My answer:
The men's guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.
Change "men" to "employees" and you'll be all set.
=)
Iposted a new question but its actually for you responce to your answer i need to correct a grammar question to this in the rule it states something about (sic) where am i suppost to add it for the two questions
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