In using comparisons, please correct this sentence.
People who live in insulated homes pay less for their heating than homes that do not.
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Sure! Here's the corrected sentence:
"Residents of insulated homes pay less for heating compared to those living in non-insulated homes."
To correct the sentence, I made a few changes:
1. Replaced "people who live" with "residents" for a more concise and clear phrasing.
2. Changed "homes that do not" to "non-insulated homes" to provide a clearer comparison.
3. Incorporated the word "compared" to emphasize the comparison between the two types of homes.