Here's another one for editing papers. Your paper was well-written btw. Hope you make it in! I can't paste the link in so if you go to Paper Rater's website, that could help.
Sunday, November 10, 2013 at 9:37am
I think you need to discuss how your experiences, and future at UConn will make you better, and make the world a better place.
Saturday, November 9, 2013 at 5:05pm
x/10000=sin(14º) x=10000sin(14º) , since sin(14º)=0.24192 x=10000*(0.24192) x=2419.2 feet
Tuesday, November 5, 2013 at 1:28pm