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Read the sentence.
The hot chocolate was a nice treat today. Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive
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Read the sentence.
Jada likes going to the pool in the summer. Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive
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The coach devised a strategic plan that is meant to be used to triumph over our opponents.
Choose the most concise way to
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I have three very last sentences I'd like you to check. Thank you.
1)You limited yourself to reporting what was on the photocopy
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Use the sentence to answer the question.
The students were late to the meeting. Which revisions would make the sentence more
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Choose what change, if any, should be made to the following sentence: "She slowly began to count down the seconds to bring in
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Yesterday I thought long and hard, and i finally realized that i really need to start exercising,
which revised sentence reduces
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Read the sentences and the question that follows.
An hour after Sheila placed the lasagna in the oven, a tantalizing aroma was
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Which revision best eliminates wordiness in the following sentence?
Marta was in total agreement with the student council's
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in the story The Case for a Mentoring Program
Melody’s opening sentence is unclear. What is the MOST effective way to revise
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12) Read the sentence below. Determine which is the best way to revise the sentence.
I also should have looked into what Petrol
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Yesterday I thought long and hard, and I finally realized that I really need to start exercising.
Which revised sentence reduces
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Read the sentence below. Determine which is the best way to revise the sentence.%0D%0A%0D%0ACell phones are a great way to
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Read the sentence below. Determine which is the best way to revise the sentence.%0D%0A%0D%0AI also should have looked into what
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Use the sentence to answer the question. Yesterday I thought long and hard, and I finally realized that I really need to start
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11) Read the sentence below. Determine which is the best way to revise the sentence. Cell phones are a great way to comunicate,
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Read the following sentence, which needs revising, editing, and proofreading:
I can’t think until I’ve had some coffee in the
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Use the sentence to answer the question. The students were late to the meeting. Which revisions would make the sentence more
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What is the BEST revision to make in sentence 33? A He and the Spirit of St. Louis made a 3-month tour of the United States,
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Read the sentence. The play was halted because of a technical problem, and disappointment rippling through the crowd. What is
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Read the paragraph from a student’s draft of a letter to the editor of the school newspaper. Select the sentences that should
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What is the MOST effective revision to make in sentence 4?
A Her best friend was Caitlyn and who had just texted her but to join
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what is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 6?
Her research paper was due on Friday, and though the topic-ranatees-
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Read the sentence.
The play was halted because of a technical problem, and disappointment rippling through the crowd. What is the
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What is the best revision for sentence 12?
1.Ultimately, he had it! 2.As a result, he had it. 3.Next, he had it. 4.Finally, he
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Use the sentence to answer the question.
The game was won by the Bluejays. How would you change the sentence from passive voice
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Use the sentence to answer the question.
The game was won by the Bluejays. How would you change the sentence from passive voice
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Use the sentence to answer the question.
The game was won by the Bluejays. How would you change the sentence from passive voice
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The following sentence needs to be revised, edited, and proofread.
Dogs are the best types of pet most dogs are easy to take care
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Read the sentence.
The police advised her to never leave her keys in a car day or night parked. Which sentence correctly revises
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1) The old, dilapidated cabin slumbered under a blanket of dry, dead leaves. (2) The cabin windows were all dirty. (3) Large
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The child held on to his mother as the train went by the platform. Revise the sentence by making the underlined words more
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Use the sentence to complete the activity.
The child held on to his mother as the train went by the platform. Revise the sentence
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The child held on to his mother as the train went by the platform. revise the sentence by making the underlined words more
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Which revision of the sentence BEST expresses the ideas clearly and concisely?
The first thing that we need to take care of when
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Read the sentence.
After school, Robbie likes to play video games, and when Robbie is playing video games after school, he likes
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58:08 Question Which revision of the sentence BEST expresses the ideas clearly and concisely? The first
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Active and Passive Voice
Active vs. passive voice
Editing
Editing and proofreading
Effective Communication
Eliminating Wordiness
English Grammar and Writing
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Grammar and Sentence Structure
Grammar and Syntax
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Misplaced Modifier
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Passive and Active Voice
Passive Voice
Precision
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Sentence Structure
Sentence structure and conciseness
Sentence Structure and Grammar
Sentence structure and punctuation
Sentence Structure and Word Choice
Text revision
Verb voice and mood
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Writing and Composition
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